needs tips, hints and kritik on this one..

[phsythax]

[NNH]: Newbie need help:

Hey! i just started use Fruity Loops v5 some weeks ago, i have always liked trance, so i started out playing around and this is what i made. it aint done yet. and as you will hear, it aint really a "real" song. give me some hints on it and tell me what you think i should edit, add, delete or redo.. or any other hint that would help me gain my skills and make some better music
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peace

[phsythax]

don't know why the link doesnt work but here is the URL:

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[BunnySoHigh]

ill let you in on a little trick. download a acapella of a song and then download the instrumental of the same song. you have to have acid pro also so go get that . but load the instrumental into fruity loops mess around with it till you get it the way you like it. now load it into acid pro and load the acapella in acid pro also so they play at the same time. now you have your remix of that song. easy as that