I created my first song. Feedback wanted.

[Neurotic]

I just started making music with FL Studio and some mediocre midi controller, but check it out anyways and give me some feedback. I need it!

This is actually the first song I have ever made, so I know it's not that great

Check it out here: http://www.myspace.com/djaphotik

[Rickorion]

This isnt my style of music but I can say that while it is a little bit generic, its a VERY GOOD first attempt. I can't technically speaking find any flaws in it.

Keep up the good work.

[t5001]

wow, I think it is really great. I just started making my own too with acid pro and mine isn't nearly as good.