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Originally Posted by DJBladereaper
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hey, had a listen to your track. there's nothing engaging about it. it seems very computerised, not a lot of rendering or filtering of the samples. that bass line is becoming a bit over-used now.
also the structure of the track is very choppy. the loop at the start would sound excellant during the first breakdown, with the melody fading through to the kick-in. the melody does sound great though, it gives expectation to the track. maybe building an extra variation after it for the attack would add to it. an extra layer for atmosphere.
giving my honest oppinion like you asked
try doing your own thing, it ruins creativity when trying to copy a style.
you odviously have a passion for production dont waste yor energy recreating songs, mix it up a bit, try swapping between a tough kick lead loop and the the body of your tune. it will sound very powerfull and makes the track sound professionally produced.